Design: This is a beginning. Bordovich is a very open designer and he uses the text as shape. At the moment the text is competing with the image. What is the most important piece of information. The heading “Indulge in creepy delights “ does not work in the space. It looks like the heading is just placed there with no connection. Take your time to really work through your design What is your hierarchy Elements of 2D: A very strong saturated colour. I am not sure you have captured his style – it is all too cluttered. The 2nd monkey does not work. Perhaps you could have used color or not color just hot hot hot. The text could have run off the center line and perhaps you can totally change the image. Just the monkey, open it up and use the picture in a different way. Use the grid as a stepping stone
Design: This is a beginning. Bordovich is a very open designer and he uses the text as shape. At the moment the text is competing with the image. What is the most important piece of information. The heading “Indulge in creepy delights “ does not work in the space. It looks like the heading is just placed there with no connection. Take your time to really work through your design
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Elements of 2D: A very strong saturated colour. I am not sure you have captured his style – it is all too cluttered. The 2nd monkey does not work. Perhaps you could have used color or not color just hot hot hot.
The text could have run off the center line and perhaps you can totally change the image. Just the monkey, open it up and use the picture in a different way. Use the grid as a stepping stone
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